Monday 19 October 2020

A 'Moment in Time' Writing

4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Room 11, Dekovyn here! I wanted to comment on this fabulous post, so I can talk about your students doing amazing writing about bubbles! I do not have a favourite because they are so good! Keep up the
    magnificent work Room 11!
    Bye!

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  2. Great work Room 11! I love all of the interesting words you used in your writing- it made me feel like I was there with you, watching and listening! Keep up the good work!

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  3. Wow! What descriptive writing. I felt transported to this moment in time. Ka pai room 11

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  4. Kia ora Room 11, I am also super impressed with your writing. Great words choices to make your writing interesting for the reader. Ka pai!

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