Hi Freya, I really like your catch phrase...'come for a double dip...' because I know that this slide is called the double dipper! Splash Planet looks really fun! Would you like to go there? Donna
Kia ora Freya, I also like the phrase "double dip" - it sounds like a fun slide! Great choice of picture - I like how the slide is going across the poster. Next time, consider a different colour for the writing - it is a little tricky to read all of the letters. Thanks for sharing your work with us Freya.
Hi Freya, I really like your catch phrase...'come for a double dip...' because I know that this slide is called the double dipper! Splash Planet looks really fun! Would you like to go there? Donna
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Kia ora Freya, I also like the phrase "double dip" - it sounds like a fun slide! Great choice of picture - I like how the slide is going across the poster. Next time, consider a different colour for the writing - it is a little tricky to read all of the letters.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your work with us Freya.
Thank you so much for the feedback
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